animatic feedback

This is still just the bare bones- needs a lot more detail and I'm a bit worried that when you get to filming you may end up with less than you hope for. The timeline exercise may help flesh it out this week.

pete

Feed back from class

-good range of shots.
-could be a quite original use of shots.
-could be bit faster with pace of music?
-we liked the use of volume bars
-some of the shots are held to long
-will be better when filmed
-dont understand all drawings, but looks good and fits well with music
-shots to long, needs to be faster, should as there is a lot of motion in the shots.
-some fun ideas
-colourful and original

Another influencing video

we liked this video as we think the ideas of moving differnet objects would work well espedcially when we film the boom box, we think that we should have it moving, for example cd's being put in and it moving along the floor.

Becky and Jessie

the lyrics

Everybody put your hands in the air and get
down on the floor

OO OO' OO OO'

They were sitting down and drinking
They were hanging out and talking
But they would'nt move to the dj's groove
An it got the DJ raging!
"Have you got any old school hip hop?
Have you got any thrash rock be pop?
Have you got anything a bit more uptempo?
Handbag? Techno? Disco? Electro?"

AAAAAAAARGH!

You better run
Cos the DJ s got a gun
Gonna end your fun
Cos the Dj s got a gun

They were standing round and posing
They were chilling out n smoking
But they wouldn't move to the DJ's groove
An it got the DJ raving!


becky and Jessie

we liked the way the shapes disapear and reapear. we would like to use a similar idea with the paint if its possible. we may use stencils with the paint.

Jessie and becky

We have also decided to shoot some scenes of the paint in a garden, on a black sheet on the floor. We feel this could be less messy,complicated, less hassle and easier to do. We want to film footprints and handprint using the 'stop start' technique.

MORE PITCHING

We also plan to do film some animation using a toy robot. we can use a setting which wioll be either quite oplain for the robot to move around in, or we could use something like a dolls house to give the effect of it being in a house.
anlother idea which we have was to film straight on, close up shots of various different peoples faces with different brightly coloured backgrounds simply speaking the lyrcis. we could speed this up so each different person says a word or a line.
Also the paint we can play around with. we could film it spattering and start and stop filming then rewind the film so it gives the effect that the paint is disapearing and reapearing.
i think if we only have the party scene included in the video it could be a bit bring, although we will have it featured.
so we just plan to have various different scenes and shots of the close up faces, the paint, the dancers, the animation and the party. all of this we will feel will create a goo, well structued music video.

Jessie

pitch

We want to start with quick shots of people entering a party and then we want to do a point of view shot showing the room filling up wit people. then another point of view shot of the person moving through the crowd of people dancing and arms everwhere. the soundtrack to be playing loudly.

We then want to hve different shots of different areas of the party.

we will then have the person moving from teh party sceen to a quieter darker room within the house. in here there is just dark cloth all over th room, and this is where the people and the luminous paint arrive.

we plan to have many differnet shots of the people throwing the paint everywhere. We plan to have close ups of different areas of the paint throwers such as hands arms, the walls as the paint hits it. we may try and also havw long high shots of the dark people throwing teh paint, we may try and do it so that we can not even see the people throwing the paint an just the luminous paint.

We would like to go back to a point of view shot of the person backing out of the room, and closing the door, turnig round and re-entering the very crowed party.

we then wnat the party to divide into two halfs to make way for the robotic dancers to enter, and they will make their way to the centre of the room and everyone will surroundbthem as they start to dance.

The poeple watching should be clapping and dancing and cheering the dancers on.
we would like a high shot of the dancers and all the people around them.

WE want a lot of differnt camera angles and shots to show how abstract the video will be, and this way we think it will fit in best wit the style and typ of music it is.

We would like to end it by lots of spining around, blurred pictures of the party and maybe the luminous paint mixed together, and then as if the person falls to the ground as the music ends.

Harriet and Becky

Teacher comments

good start- needs fleshing out so its all a lot clearer ! More detail to the pitch needed

http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=user.viewprofile&friendID=2713642 this is the bands profile on myspace, we thought that we should have a look at them, and see how they present themselves,a nd we could get some good ideas for the video. it was also interesting to see what influences them.

Futher ideas

we will also like to fil a party scene throughtout our video. this will include lots of young people, dancing in crowded room. so there will be three main scenes in our piece.
We think this is a good idea because it goes together well with the sort of music we have chosen. We got this idea from an advert we saw on television called skins


Another video which will influence us is a video by 'the klaxons' where they use glow in the dark paint, we liked this idea,so plan to use it in our video.




- in this video we liked how they used lumious clothes against a dark background.

by becky and jessie

Our chosen music

We have decided that we liked the idea of track 11- by Robots in Disguise.
We have thought of a few ideas as to what we could do as a music video, these include:
a dark room with actors in dark overalls or wearing luminous clothing. We had the idea that they may splat luminous paint all over the black canvas, we think this would go very well with the style of the music that we have chosen.
We think the music video would be really good if it was all abstract, and different.
the music would be part of a chant that the painters would be dancing to, and to add affect we may produce little robots by animation that appear at various times in the video.

By Jessie, Becky, Harriet